You need to practice those soldering skills,, Now is probably a good time to perfect the art of soldering.
Also your iron may not be hot enough to wet the whole pad and the solder won't flow if not at the right temperature,, if you are using Lead free solder,, throw it in the bin as it's useless for home builders

You need real solder with lead as it flows far better.
When inserting wires you need to twist the ends then pre-tin them and that will make it a lot easier to get good joins.
Others here may know of a good link to how to solder.
BTW that broken track is an easy fix,, No need to buy a new switch but practice on scraps first.
Phil.